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did you guys know i'm playing guitar?
as i wrote one of my songs here into the forum the idea came to me, why not try taking a melody from another love song, changing a little on the chords, write a new song. and dedicate it directly to my girlfriend?
Do you like the idea?
chose the melody song: Give love a try *by jonas brothers*
havent got a song name yet
First verse of the song is done,
You are the light
In my Heart
That Secures
That i'm Alive
Only with you
i survive.
*chorus
You Are the light
that takes me through the day
You are the light,
that Shines on my way
second verse
You Are the reason,
i'm no longer sad,
but maybe theres a reason
you still seem sad,
*chorus again*
third verse*
my heart was frozen,
but now its too heat.
Its because of you,
That my eyes dont bleed,
*fourth verse (i know theres no chorus between those.*
But surely theres a reason,
for my love to you,
But i cant give all the love back to you,
*fifth verse (last one)
I wrote all this,
as a prove of my love,
Hope you understand,
and that this is enough
*darkblue = Original thread*
*Indigo = next part*
*red = verses and chorus*
as i wrote one of my songs here into the forum the idea came to me, why not try taking a melody from another love song, changing a little on the chords, write a new song. and dedicate it directly to my girlfriend?
Do you like the idea?
chose the melody song: Give love a try *by jonas brothers*
havent got a song name yet
First verse of the song is done,
You are the light
In my Heart
That Secures
That i'm Alive
Only with you
i survive.
*chorus
You Are the light
that takes me through the day
You are the light,
that Shines on my way
second verse
You Are the reason,
i'm no longer sad,
but maybe theres a reason
you still seem sad,
*chorus again*
third verse*
my heart was frozen,
but now its too heat.
Its because of you,
That my eyes dont bleed,
*fourth verse (i know theres no chorus between those.*
But surely theres a reason,
for my love to you,
But i cant give all the love back to you,
*fifth verse (last one)
I wrote all this,
as a prove of my love,
Hope you understand,
and that this is enough
*darkblue = Original thread*
*Indigo = next part*
*red = verses and chorus*
Last edited by Eido on Fri Apr 09, 2010 1:40 pm; edited 2 times in total
playing it and singing it ^^
) But I am a fan of originality and "remixing." I'm sure you will make it sound much better than they do. 
